Not a very interesting vacation, but a vacation nowadays.

My vacation were not really interesting, if I am honest, what I did the most was  resting and relaxing. I watched many movies and TV shows I wanted to watch from a long time ago, my new favorite so far is one called House M.D. I also read a lot of books that I already had but never got the chance to read.

Some weeks in December, my dad, sisters, and I did some "remodeling" on some old furniture in my house. It was extremely exhausting but it totally worth it.

For Christmas and New year's eve we went to my grandmother's place where we celebrate with the whole family, it's kind of a traditional thing in my family. The most exciting thing we did was going to Melgar for two days before my parents vacation ended, we had a good time and I was glad the weather was not very hot those days.

These last few weeks, I had been getting bored, so I am glad I am studying again.


My family and I celebrating christmas.

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  1. Carlos Martínez2 de marzo de 2017 a las 11:05

    Hello Dani,
    You still have the following mistakes (please correct them:
    1. First of all, remember languages, nationalities, months, and days always start with a capital letter in English.
    2. As you are using 'vacation' (correctly, by the way), consider it as singular when you use a verb with it.
    3. Don't forget to write 'I' with a capital letter each single time.
    4."..what I did the most was to rest and relax": You have four verbs in there; the first makes part of the subject, the second is the main verb of the sentence, but the third and four ones are the object of the sentence, so they must be used into their 'ing' form.
    5. Be careful with that quick typing, I'm sure the wrong use of "a TV shows", "my new favorite to far", "the change to read", "to to Melgar" was not conscious.
    6. 'Christmas' and "New year's eve" mostly start with a capital letter.
    7."...and _______ with the whole family": Don't mix tenses.
    8. Talking about time, singular and plural, and the sense of an idea, remember the difference between 'these', 'this', 'that', and 'those'.
    Good job and nice pic!

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    1. Daniela.2 de marzo de 2017 a las 16:47

      Thank you a lot teacher, I just corrected the mistakes. I didn't realised I had write so fast and somehow I just not re-checked at the moment... so really, thanks.

      I only have one question, the thing about the "vacation" I just don't undestand it very well, I'll be nice if you could explain it again.

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